Hi ladies:)

So here's my dilemma... All of your encouraging words have me anxious to keep rolling, but I'm wondering if (in the interest of our Week 5 Assignment), I should pause and focus on improving the first two chapters for submission? In your opinion, what would strengthen this opening part of the story?

On another note, I have about another chapter and a half until I am completely stuck. Even if it doesn't end up being part of the Week 5 Assignment, I'd welcome any ideas you have about where the story should go!

Thanks!